response to "sunsets on the far side of the world"

i really like how this turned out. i think there is some absolutely beautiful language in this story and i love it. i am also very impressed with how the previous stories (sunsets part one and sunsets part two) were intertwined and mixed in this final story. it is still a little bit hard for me to follow in places, but that may be just because this is not exactly the kind of story that i would normally read on my own. but in saying that, i still enjoyed it and was able to stay with it. i think that the idea is great and i would like to see it finished and elongated even more.